Update rubric

Score before sending. Ten criteria, 10 points each. Ship at 90 or above with no criterion below 7.

#	Criterion	10	7	4
1	Headline	One sentence passes the quote-back test; one thesis	Clear but two competing points	Builds to the point
2	Metrics frame	Same frame and order as last period; actual, plan, prior; runway	Frame consistent, comparisons missing	Numbers vary each period
3	Metric honesty	Every number sourced; unmeasured marked; variances above 10% explained; favorable numbers paired with their unfavorable counterparts	One unexplained variance or unpaired number	Estimates presented as facts
4	Wins	Two to four facts ordered by importance with numbers and dates	Facts, ordered chronologically	Adjectives
5	Risks	Real risks named, each with an action	Risks named without actions	Obvious risk missing
6	Asks	Specific, answerable, with forwardable blurbs; last period's asks reported	Specific, no loop closed	Generic
7	Say-do ledger	Last period's commitments restated exactly, each with a true status word; three dated commitments for next period	Reported loosely, or commitments vague	Absent
8	Status language	Every relationship, hire, and deal at its true status	One status overstated	"In motion" language throughout
9	Audience fit	Length and register match the audience; confidential data protected	Slightly long	Wrong register or oversharing
10	Voice and restraint	Plain, specific, no empty phrases, one idea per paragraph	One cliché	Reads like a press release